Here is Katharine's narrative about a surprising find at the park.
She has chosen some really descriptive verbs and phrases, and has used dialogue to add interest. Have a listen and leave a comment on what you have heard.
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I liked the verbs that you said katharine. Next time you could disriciribe who the person is like a bit more.R.P
ReplyDeleteHi Katharine
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed listening to your narrative. I liked the way the children didn't give up even when they had a few problems to overcome e.g falling into the water. I suppose every time they played with the boat at home they would remember the time they fell into the pond to get it!!!
Great work.
katharine who is heny
ReplyDeletegrace heny is a boy he is mona's brother and mona
ReplyDeleteis a girl.