Tariq has written a really cool story about an adventure at the beach. We think it's interesting the way that Tariq has chosen to write his story in the first person (using 'I', instead of 'he'). It can help the reader to imagine what it was like for the main character.
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Hi Tariq
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed listening to your story. It was very kind of you to share the boat with other people. Fancy the boat getting stuck in the rocks. Well done