Here is Herbert's holiday recount. He tried to make his writing more detailed by choosing specific verbs. What specific verbs can you hear?? Please leave a comment with some helpful feedback for Herbert.
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wow!Herbet you had a fantastic holiday i wish i can go there to.
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ReplyDeletehow you said you speeded to burger king and i like your verbs.
that sounds like fun.and i can already smell
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Hi Herbert, thanks for sharing your holiday story about going to Tauranga, it is a lovely place to visit. I like the way you used the verb 'raced', much more interesting than 'went'. Well done. From Mrs Stewart.
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