Have a listen to Sarah's boat disaster story.
Which words do you like the sound of? Can you offer Sarah any suggestions to improve her story?
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Sarah!your story is amazing.I liked the way you said the sentance staters
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ReplyDeleteI enjoyed listening to your narrative. I like the way you described how something got stuck in the motor of the boat and it zoomed out of control around the lake. Well done
Hi Sarah, I enjoyed your story about the boat because I love to go boating and there are times when I have thought that our dinghy motor also 'had a mind of it's own'; I liked the way you used this phrase. Thanks for sharing your story. From Mrs Stewart.
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