Amanda and Lata are working really hard on their narratives - have a listen... The girls have chosen these stories to publish. Can you give them any suggestions to help with the editing process? Please leave a comment with your advice.
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Maybe you could use the name 'Fido' more instead of 'dog'.
ReplyDeleteI think that it's not quite right to say 'gobbled up'. Instead you could just say 'chased the bone' or you could say he chomped on it or licked.
ReplyDeleteLata, I think your story is awesome. Next time you do a podcast maybe you could try to relax and sound more confident.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you said the dog farts a lot. I liked that part because when my dog Banksy farts you have to go outside because it stinks. It made me laugh.
ReplyDeletelata why did the bulldog always fart?
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