We have invented some really interesting characters!
We were learning to...
- choose words that give our reader a clear picture of the character in their mind
- explain the sort of character they are
- try out different sentence starters
Listen to the children reading aloud their work. Do you think the pictures match up with the descriptions?
Please write a comment about your favourite words or phrases.
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Sarah
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed listening to your character description - Hannah sounds like an interesting character. You said she wears a black dress , so that she is not seen so I was wondering when she wears that lovely red dress she is wearing in your picture?
Mrs rennie younger, at home she wears the red dress in the streets she wears a black dress.
ReplyDeleteMrs Rennie Younger, at home she wears the red dress in the streets she wears a black dress.
ReplyDeleteThanks for that Sarah - I thought you;d have a good reason why she was wearing the red dress. I look forward to listening to your next post. Keep the great work up.
ReplyDeletewe loved Rachel's story because she explained what the bear was wearing.
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