Wednesday, August 4, 2010

Herbert's Happy Holiday

Here is Herbert's holiday recount. He tried to make his writing more detailed by choosing specific verbs. What specific verbs can you hear?? Please leave a comment with some helpful feedback for Herbert.

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4 comments:

  1. wow!Herbet you had a fantastic holiday i wish i can go there to.

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  2. i like
    how you said you speeded to burger king and i like your verbs.

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  3. that sounds like fun.and i can already smell
    the food you ate. (i like chinese food )

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  4. Hi Herbert, thanks for sharing your holiday story about going to Tauranga, it is a lovely place to visit. I like the way you used the verb 'raced', much more interesting than 'went'. Well done. From Mrs Stewart.

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